I'd suggest that in A5.5.8-1

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their
persistence manager and have not been
modified are detached-clean.] Detach is done by one of three ways:

The phrase "Detach is done by one of three ways" would read better as
"Detachment is done in one of three ways", as follows:

A5.5.8-1 [JDO instances that have been detached from their
persistence manager and have not been
modified are detached-clean.] Detachment is done in one of three ways:

- Chris

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where are these new draft versions posted?

- C

On Sep 25, 2007, at 11:04 AM, Craig L Russell wrote:

> Hi Chris,
>
> Fixed in draft dated 2007-9-28.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Craig
>
> On Sep 15, 2007, at 1:32 PM, cbeams wrote:
> 
>
> Craig Russell
> Architect, Sun Java Enterprise System http://java.sun.com/products/jdo
> 408 276-5638 mailto:Craig.Russell@sun.com
> P.S. A good JDO? O, Gasp!
>

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